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there i changed it read it now see if its a bit better

The Depth is a horror game the story line is you (harry) are living with your girlfriend and late on night she suddenly dies, the police investigate, and the hospital says she died by cancer you wonder and cry about how it happened so fast, then you go into a deep depression and attempt to kill yourself multiple times and fail and that's when you start to get sick about a week after and you find a note stabbed to the door with a funny looking knife and a weird looking crest, it has an address on it you decide to see if he or she knows whats happening so you investigate Additional info: using rpgmaker XP monster pop out and chase concepts long storyline crooked man style anime pop ups

ok i will do that and yes i do mean that thanks (i am sortof new so yea)

Hello RMU community i am making a game called The Depth and i am recruiting application (btw it is a horror game): 1. what you want to be (tileset maker,sprite maker,noise maker,script editor,artist)? 2.Age? 3.why should i choose you? 4.are you experienced? 5.do you have skype (needed)? 6 what is your skype?