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Hmm.... The shapes and proportions of the body are kinda off... The head is kinda oval shaped on a horizontal axis, rather than vertical... The feet, on the side views, kinda look like barely attached potatoes... And from behind he looks like his legs are detached while he walks because of the pink I guess... The mouth and cheeks make his face resemble a puffer fish... and the bright blue clothing with ... neon pink trimming? is a bit odd... All in all it is kinda harsh on the eyes... On the side view, the hair shading is much nicer than on the front/back views. On the front view, the hair looks like a balloon kinda ... I think you need to focus the shadow and highlights there a little more evenly, instead of just at the edges where it makes the hair look inflated. Personally, I'd leave the mouth off entirely before putting a little black dot there... it makes his cheeks look very round... Of course, if they're meant to be, it's perfect. All in all, not very bad... I hope my critique helps! Best of luck with it!

Is this going to be similar to the facemaker program that's available for making facesets?? I love the idea! I hope there will be more detail to the characters (I know you said you didn't shade yet...) and lots of variety to each part... also make sure there's lots and lots of parts that can be edited and make it so you can use an RGB scale to change colors on everything... then it'd be UBER... Do you know facemaker? http://umeumewoman.fc2web.com/ Anyway, this looks great! I hope you finish it! ^-^

I hate golf, but that's a terribly innovative idea... If they hadn't already done golf games with stuff like Mario and that crazy game I can't remember the name of where you rode the golf ball around as a weird creature... this would be completely original... I think. I like it... not sure I'd play it, but I'm picky about games. I agree with others here... make a very interesting story and it could be cool. :)

I got a problem loading page error on it... is it down again, or just not back up yet?

Mainly, keep flaming absolutely against the rules. Require respect to all members by all members including mod staff. Sharp, efficient moderators have been a key factor to success in forums I've been a part of and managed before. Good luck! I'll check this forum out more when I have time later.

Never heard of it before but I will go check it out now! Ty!

... If this refers to what I think? Congratulations! I support good grammar! ^-^ ... If this does not refer to what I think... then... assume I'm just a noobesh and ignore me. Either way... <3 because I like <3. So there.

Redoing the forum might be nice for you guys... but dropping all of the content here... Gods... That'd really suck. This forum is so nicely built up. Consider this: What do you think people want more? An uber-powered forum, or good content? I'd accept a crappy, old styled link system forum if it had the kind of content this place does... If you're going to lose all the posts... I for one will not likely be back for a looong long time until it's been built up again. Most people who don't like forums much but will participate here for the mutual information this place has to offer will not show up again... I am totally against it. I may be a total noob here, but I'm excited about continuing here until I'm not a total noob and then maybe even until I'm not a noob at all. I could even be a veteran one day! Y'know? So please don't redo the forum... I, for one, am completely against it. I don't want the info here that I've bookmarked to be gone when I return to check it out again... It's too great a place to go the way of Atlantis. Please.

This actually gave me and my husband some cool ideas... Well some things to avoid and some things to do, not to say that the things to do /were/ cliches... but it inspired! Thanks! Considering my game is about a succubus, I'm especially glad to note the fashion rules... Now I'll have to make lots of sprites for her and change them regularly to make her change clothes for appropriateness... lol Ty ty!

I tried to combine a star shaped star with the bronze armor as many as I had, then blank for the rest... it gave me this: --------------------------- STaR System --------------------------- ????? 'STaR Creation' ? 780 ??? NoMethodError ???????? undefined method `name=' for nil:NilClass --------------------------- OK --------------------------- Just thought you might wanna know bout that... Eep... when trying to combine the magus fragments I got : --------------------------- STaR System --------------------------- ????? 'STaR Creation' ? 710 ??? NoMethodError ???????? undefined method `name=' for nil:NilClass --------------------------- OK --------------------------- I keep running into errors... lol. Sorry! I hope this helps!

My game has been inspired by a roleplaying game I play with my husband. It's a story we started out of the blue one day just to play between us in order to throw around a character concept I'd had for a succubus. As the story went on, I had developed the character and found a spot where I wanted to throw in an npc character, a youngling succubus who was interested in learning something from the succubus I'd originally created because she was an older and more powerful succubus. This second succubus was called Briar... At first, I couldn't get into her character all that well and I didn't really have any "feeling" for playing her so I avoided throwing her into the story very often... but as things progressed, I found some interesting places to insert her... Eventually, I suddenly found that I had a feel for her now and she was now one of "my" characters ... not just an NPC. I have since found a solid place for her in the original game and as it turns out, she even became more the main character of the game than the first succubus... It's a strange but deeply intriguing story. Anyway, she's an odd one... very young for a succubus and very cute... I had a concept come to me one day ... what if Briar fell in love with Rohan (he's the guy that summoned the original succubus in the first place... Briar ended up living with them.)... Well to my understanding this would get her killed by Lilith (her mother of course)... But Rohan insists... believes... that anyone could fall in love... even an evil creature like a succubus... and that god might even forgive her if she really tried... Ah but I'm getting into the story more than the inspiration... heh... It is to say that my game is inspired by the roleplayed version of it in real life... So it's also partly inspired by my husband, and my own character, Briar. Other than that... it's just inspired by a random idea about what would happen "if..."

Bah. If I want to release a Demo of my game as a snippet of the beginning with a HOOK to get you interested in playing more, then why shouldn't I? That's not Beta unless I want you to test it for me and give me feedback and bug reports. If it's just a demonstration of my final release, that doesn't make it Beta just because of how I chose to represent what my game would be like. I could do it your way, or I could do it another way. Not doing it how you suggested does not automatically make it a Beta though. In my experience, a beta version is one released with the intension of allowing people to play as testers and submit bug reports. If I want to sell my game and I release a Demo, it's so that you'll give it a go and decide "hmm, I want to play the whole thing!" and then pay me for the rest of it. I've played Demos that were like you described, "highlights" of the game's features, but I've also played demos (and I mean professional demos by big game companies as well) that were simply the beginning of the game, leading until a hook to get you stuck on the game and cause you to want to buy it. I just find this post to be opinionated...

Story... If it doesn't have an uberly intriguing story, I'll give up on it... I gave up on FF7 even... I'm a really hard to please critic when it comes to games. I've almost never completed an rpg because they usually get repetitive or boring at some point and I get distracted...

Love Impact, a fan game for Yami no Matsuei... It's shonen-ai for Tsusuki and Hisoka... Very cute, very tasteful... and lots of cute cool side games! I adored it. :) It's not XP ... I don't think... but is a full rpgmaker game... so does that count?

I can't say I cracked a smile ... but maybe future strips would have more to them?

Just saying hello! I followed a link in a sig from RMXP.org and found my way here! I'm currently working on my own project as well as helping with my husband's so I have a lot of researching to do!