paulo 0 Report post Posted January 16, 2014 (edited) Warnings: 1. This is my first attempt at a game. 2. This game takes place in a non-ideal "heaven" ruled over by a non-ideal "god." There are parallels to real world religion. Play this game cautiously if you're religous. Story: A girl named Lilly manages to find a genie. This is what she wished for: 1. Destroy the world 2. Recreate the world 3. Erase my memories. Lilly wakes up in a very strange place called "NeverDieHapyLand." This is a happy place (hence the HappyLand part) and the people here never age, and never die. (hence the NeverDie part). She doesn't know where she is, or what is going on. She meets two mysterious entities. Phantom Jerry, ruler of the land, and his brother, Phantom Jared, who has some ideas of his own. She also meets some strange friends, with stories of their own. When she doesn't know who to trust, she decides to explore, and investigate this mysterious place, searching for answers to her million questions. As she learns what is going on, she questions the legitimacy of everything. The World of NeverDieHappyLand: In NeverDieHappyLand, everything grows on trees. There is no economy, because everything grows on trees. You shouldn't accept gifts from anyone, because everything grows on trees. Even bouncy balls grow on trees. The world is made out of childish delights such as candy, and other fun things. But unfortunately, it has suffered the aftermath of a horrible war, known as The Great Cotton Candy War. Nowadays, it is very hard to find candy in the Candy Forest. The cotton candy elves have all gone extinct, and now everything is dictated by Phantom Jerry. Before you are even born, Phantom Jerry decides whether you are good or evil. The "evil" ones are sent to a secluded place known as Xenuz City. The good ones live "freely" in NeverDieHappyLand. Whoever does not follow Phantom Jerry's teachings is sent to a mysterious place called the Grimworld. And everyone from Xenuz City will inevitably end up in Grimworld one day. Characters: Lilly: The main character. Responsible for destroying the world, and turning it into NeverDieHappyLand. Without her memories, she must search for clues about NeverDieHappyLand, and about herself. Phantom Jerry: Ruler of NeverDieHappyLand. Dictates everything. He has a bit of an ego. Phantom Jared: Jerry's brother, who's motives conflict with Jerry's plans. Carmen: Leader of an occult group from Xenuz City. She plans on doing terrible things to Phantom Jerry, and even some of his faithful followers. Chloe: Founder of NeverDieHappyLand's Phantom Jerry Fanclub. Grim: A girl who's sole purpose is to send people to the Grimworld. Her terrible fate eventually leads her to rebelliion. Screenshots: Gameplay Style: This is going to be mostly a text-adventure game, with some puzzles and other challenges as well. There is no battle or health system. There are collectable items that don't do anything, and are just collectables. Credits: Audio: Aaron Krogh, GyroWolf, Graphics: Sithjester, Sleep (sleepy-rpgmaker.tumblr.com), Matheus Viera, Some credits may be missing due to me simply forgetting to copy paste them into a WordPad file :(. If anyone recognizes any of the graphics, music, etc. please let me know. Super Early Demo: https://www.mediafire.com/?g81z2fdn7adrm1e Thank you for taking the time to read this post. If you decided to give the game a try than thanks for that as well. Feel free to give the harshest criticism you can, as long as it's constructive. I'd appreciate the feedback. This is an unfinished version of the game, thus things are subject to change. Edited January 16, 2014 by paulo Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
