Captain Charfield 2 Report post Posted August 24, 2015 So im writing a short story, I would like some feedback while its still early into the actual story, I am updating every few days/week so it may take awhile until its finished. I do plan on giving it a front cover.etc for when its finished so I can offer it as a .pdf download (It'll also make it look awesome XD) Google Docs: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1J1UrOYruy9ywFu67hACfIiyY2oVq1xj2OBQ_QRXtgy8/edit?usp=sharing I'll update the link every week so its upto date. You can be as brutal as you want when criticizing me..since well any criticism is good criticism. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ShinkuAura 15 Report post Posted August 25, 2015 Pretty interesting, however it's late and i feel sleepy to finish the short story here. Do you plan on extending it? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Captain Charfield 2 Report post Posted August 25, 2015 yeah, I plan on extending it a bit, it's still a work in progress and i've done about 1/2 of chater i (1) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
zahraa 26 Report post Posted August 26, 2015 Hey I enjoyed the story! It's kinda inspiring. I like how you described the first scene. I'm interested to read more! Good luck with that. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Captain Charfield 2 Report post Posted August 31, 2015 I haven't really updated the story much, been having writers block, looking for work and getting ready for my college course, the first link should direct you to the story still, I did write a paragraph I think the other day, I'll be starting on it again in a few days after i've applied for a few more jobs XD Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
