Peasant Tale

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PEASANT TALE

Includes: Demo

 

 

 

 

I was working on this at another website but my account got banned so i need to restart.. This place seems more cleaner. <_<

 

Plot

A young boy runs away from home and ends up in a new town called Asand. He tries to find a place to sleep and ends up bunking in with another fellow named, Terrance. Terrnace and the boy, William become good friends and decide to help each other out. So they go try to live alone together and start fresh. Will and Terrance cross paths with two elven people. They ask for some simple assistance from Will and Terrance but thats not all their going to end up doing. What will happen to William and Terrance?

 

Youtube Video ->Original Video

 

Demo

v1.0 - http://www.megaupload.com/?d=PN5YXW2Y

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Theres the demo!!!!!!!!!!! :D

[Arkbennett 16]

Alrighty, first off. I gotta say, you do a good job as far as storylines go. And your speech wasn't to bad, although I found it hard to see the differences in personalities between Trevor (Terrance) and Will.

When they were talking in the in inn room, it felt like the same person talking to himself. That said, Terrance hasn't had a fair share amount of time for character development. So I leave it alone.

 

You must be new to Rpg Maker, which is good, it's always nice to have fresh talent. However, your mapping skills do need some work on. Why don't you refer to Black Shadow's mapping tutorials here at the site? I'm sure they'd do you some good.

Notable things I'd like to point out graphically would be the fencing, and lack of doors. There is a characterset that has doors you can use. Also, the enviroment is rather bland, with hardly a variety of vegitation as well as terrain differences.

 

As I said before, besides the two main characters, speech went find. With the exception of the gazillion amount of grammical errors to be found. Like the mispelling of "Through" as "Threw". Simple things like that should be fixed. If you unsure on how to spell something, don't improvise, look it up.

 

When it came to eventing, I gotta say you got a little lazy. Especially with the bully scene. When you panned the screen, you didn't pan it back. Plus I could reactivate them bullying your sister multiple times.

Use a local switch for minor changes like that. It could be said you got lazy when it came to eventing, when I went from one town to another, you just went into story telling mode. There isn't a need to rush the story. You should make a section inbetween that. That way you can fight monsters and give the player time to like the main character, even throw in some cutscenes for further character development before you throw in another hero.

 

Overall, I can't say Peasant Tale was a good experience, the only fun factor was the storyline. It does, however, have potential to be a good game. Just needs some rework on the graphics and event processing.