undoingearth 0 Report post Posted November 15, 2008 Story "there are four elements in this world...but two off them are constantly at war...dark and light" The story sets off with a speech of the element and and introduction to our main characters...one day seth "our hero" was off to chop some wood out side of his wood cabin when he is attacked by a soldier of Armenon. He finds him self on a crash course to the kingdom, of which he despises, were he meets a girl named Lacuna. She is the gift of the creators. Armenon will stop at nothing to have her destroyed. in the end might just save the world...or he might just stop it all from the beginning Characters Seth: A man of unknown origins who live alone out in the woods of the Continent of Adrisyle Ariel: A knight of the imperial kingdom, she may have a crush on seth..... Zac: A hitman for hire turnd adventurer and treasure seeker after being hired for seth (more to come of good guys) Arik: A mysterious man working for the dark The Servant: Armenons friend and servant Armenon: a Crazed man, obsessed with destroying the world Encounters are on contact Tittle i used the pic from the resources i will give credit in the credits Seth and his house World map Karnak (city) Mt. North cave </br> Armenon The transformation Battle system (still kinda buggy) and please tell me of any bugs Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
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Polraudio 122 Report post Posted November 15, 2008 DEMO REVIEW Please don't get mad at the review. It has to be done. I played your game and i have a review on what should be fixed or what you can improve on. Lets start with the upper left. You cannot enter the room to the left and where is the wall? Also the room is a little bare and to big. On the bottom wheres the floor? Her stepping is not right. There are to many flowers. For the water you forgot to put it on the 2nd layer so you get black spots on the ends. The fountain you can go through. I would suggest using other tiles that block the player under the fountain. The guards on the top are in the water that's not right. The left guard on the bottom. His graphic is not set right. Every time you talk to to the wood she talks and moves to the left. When the event is over and she has joined i talked to the wood again and she still talked. I cant walk across this part on the dock. What is the Captain standing on? It don't look like a plank in any way. Finally the map that makes me sad just by looking at it. First you its harder than hell to find the entrance to the towns or other places. And having the ability to walk over the towns. that's not right. Other: Other than that its not a bad game. Lots of work to do with the maps. Its also nice to see someone using my windowskins. Tips: Please remember to test your maps at least 20 times and spend at least 30min on each map before moving the the next map. And check your events at least 20 times. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
undoingearth 0 Report post Posted November 15, 2008 ok i have the entrances to the towns at the front gate...yhea thats not a big deal also when you activate the wood block does she run all the way to the tree cause that has never happend when i test it also...im not being rude or disrespectful but please if your going to tell me whats wrong with my maps...at least throw in some advise for fixing them also i have spent hours into my maps so please dont act like i made them in 15 min. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Arkbennett 16 Report post Posted November 16, 2008 With all due respect polraudio, you should spend much more than 30 minutes to make a good looking map. 30 minutes makes an adequate map, I feel. I think to make a really good map, you should at least devote an hour to and hour and a half. Maybe less if it's a small map. But that's just my opinion. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
