Arkbennett 16 Report post Posted January 1, 2009 Just in the planning stages of one of my games and I drew up some concept art. Tell me what ya think! lol. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Polraudio 122 Report post Posted January 1, 2009 Looks good. I like the hair style. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Arkbennett 16 Report post Posted January 1, 2009 Thanks! And thanks for the feedback polraudio! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
isaacsol 10 Report post Posted January 1, 2009 Looks good. One bit of advice, draw in pencil, then go over in a fineliner pen, not a ballpoint, will look much better. I especially like the hair style. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Arkbennett 16 Report post Posted January 2, 2009 Thanks isaacsol! lol I know I should be drawing in pencil! lol, and I'll try the fineliner pen thing! lol what can I say? ball point is my best friend. lol. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wyzrd 12 Report post Posted January 3, 2009 Looks good. One bit of advice, draw in pencil, then go over in a fineliner pen, not a ballpoint, will look much better. I especially like the hair style. That's a matter of personal opinion I think. I write my songs in pen, when I should probably write in pencil so I can erase something I wanna change. But even still I prefer writing in a nice gel ink pen. I just like the way it is. :D Nice drawing Ark. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiriashi 117 Report post Posted March 2, 2009 (I've never necro-posted before so can I have off just this once? It is a good post at least. :lol: ) Thanks isaacsol! lol I know I should be drawing in pencil! lol, and I'll try the fineliner pen thing!lol what can I say? ball point is my best friend. lol. Hehe, that is the most "lol"s I've seen in one post. 4! That's a matter of personal opinion I think. I write my songs in pen, when I should probably write in pencil so I can erase something I wanna change. But even still I prefer writing in a nice gel ink pen. I just like the way it is. :D Same here, I always write with pens. I don't like the scratchy sound when you write in pencil. Nice drawing Ark. Criticism: I love this drawing, (though yes you should be using the pencil>pen-erase technique) the hair style and positioning is amazing and well done. I think the nose should be a little bit more down and then a little bit more to the right. I think the neck shadow should be lighter, though this is probably because of the pen. The eye position is also well done. You should make this in fotoshawp! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Arkbennett 16 Report post Posted March 3, 2009 Well thanks for that short review Kiriashi. Yeah, the pen makes the shadow darker. And the major problem I really have is eye placement, so it's a miracle that I got that right. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nisage 31 Report post Posted March 3, 2009 That's really good, I find drawing hands (fingers mostly) to be hard to draw. Though I did pretty good with the hands for one drawing. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiriashi 117 Report post Posted March 3, 2009 Well thanks for that short review Kiriashi. Yeah, the pen makes the shadow darker. And the major problem I really have is eye placement, so it's a miracle that I got that right. No problem, I thank a good drawing deserves a good review. Mini-review at least.. That's really good, I find drawing hands (fingers mostly) to be hard to draw. Though I did pretty good with the hands for one drawing. Don't we all? I sometimes just draw mittens so that you can't see the hands. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Arkbennett 16 Report post Posted March 3, 2009 lol. Kiriashi, you cheat. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nisage 31 Report post Posted March 3, 2009 I cheat more then Kiriashi, I put the hands behind their backs so I don't have to draw them at all :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiriashi 117 Report post Posted March 3, 2009 Hehe wow! Are you going to do anymore with this picture Arky? (I've done that sometimes Nisage ;)) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Arkbennett 16 Report post Posted March 6, 2009 lol hackz. I might.. Eventually. As the project develops. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiriashi 117 Report post Posted March 6, 2009 Hmm, are you going to release any info on said project perhaps? (That sounded odd) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Arkbennett 16 Report post Posted March 6, 2009 Eventually, when it's more developed. Right now it's just a skeleton. Then comes the meat, the muscle, the flesh, and the... Oh so luscious.. Breast... Then it's good and ready to be... Played with... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiriashi 117 Report post Posted March 6, 2009 I..can't wait? I'm pretty sure you need hair before breast. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Arkbennett 16 Report post Posted March 6, 2009 *Sigh* That's one more step to those bouncy boobs... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiriashi 117 Report post Posted March 6, 2009 You'll get there soon enough. Can I please have a PM with at lease a little bit of info on the game? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Arkbennett 16 Report post Posted March 7, 2009 lolz. Why are you so interested..? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
