formlesstree4 18 Report post Posted May 8, 2009 I was depressed when I wrote this.. The story. The shots echoed throughout the valley. Eggman stood over Sonics’ bloodied corpse, laughing like the mad man he is. An explosion rang out behind him, as what remained of his main building was destroyed. He chuckled, while getting into his escape vehicle. The days that hog would interfere were long gone now. He slammed a button, and took off leaving a trail of burnt grass next to Sonic. Another explosion echoed off the valley walls. A large tower had fallen; the last structure of Eggmans’ terrible facility was gone. The group was celebrating but something felt wrong. “Where’s Sonic?” Tails asked. Amy looked around. “I don’t know…” Amy said. “This isn’t like him…he’s usually the one leading the celebrations.” Amy started to walk around. Her heart was racing as she came over a hill. “Tails, over here!” Amy cried out. She wanted her eyes to lie to her, but they refused. Tails came up behind her, and gasped in shock. He turned around to prevent Cream from coming closer. She looked questioningly at Tails. “Tails…why won’t you let me through?” she asked. Tails began to tear up as he hugged Cream. Knuckles ran up to see Tails in tears holding Cream. He saw Amy frozen in place at the top of the hill. He ran up and gasped at what he saw. “No…” he whispered, clenching his fists. “Goddamn it, no!” he yelled out slamming the ground. Cream had already figured it out and was crying into Tails shoulder. Knuckles ran down the hill with Amy following him. They slowed to a walk as they approached his body. Amy started crying as Knuckles checked for a pulse. He gulped. “He’s…he’s dead Amy.” He said, tearing up as well. Amy hugged Knuckles for comfort as the entire group mourned for the death of their friend. … The funeral was two weeks later. It was a small funeral, just as the group requested. Amy, Knuckles, Tails, Cream, Shadow and Rouge sat in the front row. Amy was in tears, Tails and Knuckles were in shock, and Cream was crying her eyes out. Tails did what he could to comfort her, but he too felt the pain. I'm so tired of being here. Suppressed by all my childish fears, And if you have to leave, I wish that you would just leave. 'Cause your presence still lingers here. Amy got up to give flowers to Sonic. As she saw his face, she knelt down and cried, her tears falling into the casket. And it won't leave me alone! These wounds won't seem to heal, This pain is just too real! There's just too much that time cannot erase! Tails followed her, taking Cream with him. Tails told himself he wouldn’t cry, but he soon broke down too. Together, he and Cream laid their flowers down, paying their respects. They sat down with Amy at his casket comforting her. The rain started to fall, and it appeared the very heavens were crying at the loss of him. When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears. When you'd scream I'd fight away all of your fears! Amy thought back to the older days. She tried to remember his voice, but it eluded her. She sat got up with Tails and Cream, and the trio walked back to their seat. And I held your hand through all of these years, But you still have… All of me! Knuckles sat his flowers down, looking into the casket. He balled up his fists and walked to his seat, holding back tears. Shadow and Rouge, hand in hand, quietly walked up to the casket. Rouge took one look and cried into Shadow’s shoulder. He held her close to him, as they paid their final respects to the fallen hero. You used to captivate me, By your resonating light. Now I'm bound by the life you left behind. The priest said their final prayer as they closed the casket. They proceeded to a hearse, where they all got in. The emotions were intense, as Amy sat crying into Knuckles, Cream just holding on to Tails, and Rouge crying her eyes out into Shadow. Your face it haunts, My once pleasant dreams. Your voice it chased away, All the sanity in me! The cemetery had an arid feeling to it. The priest was saying the blessings to the burial site while holding back his own tears. The group stood outside in the rain, while several onlookers joined in, taking off their hats and joining in the sorrow. These wounds won't seem to heal, This pain is just too real, There's just too much that time cannot erase! Amy stayed at Knuckles. She laid down in his bed since Knuckles had opted to take the couch, and cried herself to sleep. Knuckles came in when he heard her cry during the night. He stayed with her to comfort her. When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears, When you'd scream I'd fight away all of your fears! Amy’s dreams were a mess. She saw him, and heard him as if nothing happened. She begged the dream to be reality. When she awoke, she was crying. Knuckles held her close to his body. She turned around and saw Knuckles asleep beside her. She hugged him back, and cuddled close. And I held your hand through all of these years, But you still have… All of me! Tails and Cream had stayed together that night. The two were sitting together in Tails bedroom. She had gone to sleep, but Tails couldn’t. His mind was wandering off to Sonic and their adventures together. Tails tried to remember the good times, but his mind refused to let him. I'm so tired of being here, Suppressed by all my childish fears. Tails broke down into tears randomly, waking up Cream. She sat up and noticed Tails was sitting in a chair. He was a total mess. She got up and walked to him, sitting on his lap. She hugged him and Tails returned it. The two sat there the rest of the night, with Tails and later Cream crying. And if you have to leave, I wish that you would just leave, 'Cause your presence still lingers here, And it won't leave me alone! Rouge sat at her house with Shadow next to her. He was holding on to her as she was still in shock. Shadow didn’t cry, but he kept his eyes shut, holding back the tears. Rouge was crying into his shoulder and Shadow let it out. He cried for the first time in his life. He had had enough of everything. He couldn’t believe what was happening. These wounds won't seem to heal! This pain is just too real, There's just too much that time cannot erase! He picked up Rouge, and carried her to her room. He gently sat her down in her bed, and laid down behind her. They held each other close together, gently crying each other sleep. Their dreams were filled with nightmares of what had happened to Sonic and their fears of what happens next. Sonic looked down from the heavens. He sighed to himself. “They’re mourning because you left them.” A voice said. Sonic looked behind him, and saw his mother. Sonics’ eyes watered up and he ran to her, crying. The two embraced for the first time in 19 years. He truly cried for the first time into her shoulders. When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears, When you'd scream I'd fight away all of your fears. “It wasn’t your time Sonic.” She said. “But you’re here now. Watch over them, and guide them.” Sonic looked at her questioningly. “Watch over them, keep them safe Sonic.” She whispered. “I’ll guide you if you need me to.” And I held your hand through all of these years, But you still have, All of me. Italics are song lyrics Song: My Immortal by Evanescence. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Polraudio 122 Report post Posted May 8, 2009 Good story and sorry to hear you were depressed. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
formlesstree4 18 Report post Posted May 8, 2009 Thanks.. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tomo2000 60 Report post Posted May 10, 2009 I like the story. I never really liked the Sonic games, so this story was pretty humorous to me. And like what Polraudio said; Sorry to hear that you were depressed. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
formlesstree4 18 Report post Posted May 18, 2009 Just an update, the story has a name: Our Fallen Hero Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Polraudio 122 Report post Posted May 18, 2009 that's a nice name for it. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
formlesstree4 18 Report post Posted May 19, 2009 Thanks. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jesse66126 4 Report post Posted May 19, 2009 *Gives Sonic a Continue,50 Rings,and all 7 Chaos Emeralds* VENGENCE!! I think Sonic really can die in Sonic Heroes,as an alternate ending.(Bleh,Shadow owns Sonic anyway.) Don't drink while drepressed,it'll just make it worse. I watch Steel Angel Kurumi when I'm depressed. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Azure Flames 1 Report post Posted August 11, 2009 Depression on my birthday month, huh? I like Amy. And Rogue. But Shadow is just kinda neutral... Hmm... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
formlesstree4 18 Report post Posted August 12, 2009 Meh, it is an old story now. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
LovePhoenix 3 Report post Posted August 12, 2009 Despite it's oldness, I liked it nevertheless. I kinda liked the part where Rouge and Shadow are together the most. lol Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Azure Flames 1 Report post Posted August 12, 2009 Aw. I thought crying into each other was kinda cute. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
formlesstree4 18 Report post Posted August 14, 2009 :3 thanks guys..I'm really glad you enjoyed it...I can't seem to write something else like it. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites