Rate what I have for project - Updated

[vincestick 13]

Here is what I have so far for my project. Please rate and critique, be as helpful as possible...and for the love of pie, no flaming.

 

The title screen was made with Artofmin's title-icon-things using Fireworks (a program similar to photoshop).

Title Screen

 

Here is the first floor of a house I made (Ignore the Thief guy, he's my Event tester, Steve).

House Floor 1

 

Here is the second floor of the house (The chest is there to test password-protected chests).

House Floor 2

 

Here is a 'Frankenbattler' I made just a bit ago. I'm using this guy's sprite and face, but I couldn't find a full body battler of him holding a weapon so I decided to make one. I did the body and just cropped a picture of his head on it. (Technically it isn't 100% mine, but please do not take this and use it.)

Frankenbattler

 

Here is also my pause menu. I used a script that included the graphics for the windows. I'm pretty mush using the default graphics for it except for the background. I made the background. I do plan on changing some things, like the location box and some things within the menu....

Menu Screen

 

I'm using one character from VX for the last guy (the guy with the beard). I purchased both XP and VX in case you're wondering. I found a battler for him on a site and I made the sprite for him myself (you can see him on the room 1 & 2 pic).

For Arash, I have both battler and sprite but I edited a Rm2k3 faceset and put a headband on him.

 

So, that's it for now. I'll put more up once I get further into my project.

[solshadow 0]

I like the title screen and as for the House floors, they are good but IMO the doors look a bit....not right. Like someone just took the wall from there. If you put an end tile on either side of the door it would look alot better...but thats just me. Everything is good tho, great job :D

[Leon 55]

The title screen isn't bad, but the mapping, well. you do needs ends for your doorways, and your building(s) seem empty.

[Nisage 31]

First, what do you mean by "flaming"? Second, the Title Screen is nice, you could have a cloud or two in it, but that's me, 9/10. First Floor, everything seems ok to me, where did you get those doors though? (top right room) 10/10. Second Floor, You could have doors for those two rooms and those stairs are the ones that lead to an upstairs, but it's an interesting way of using them. 8/10. The Battle Graphic is nicely done, I like the shield design, but I think it's a bit bright. 9/10. So your total is....... 9/10 = Great :)

[vincestick 13]

Well, for flaming I just meant something like really negative effects, like 'you suck' or 'give up RMXP' or anything else in that direction, especially when they say that and don't add any constructive criticism.

 

I completely overlooked the doorways, I'll fix them straight away. Adding doors wouldn't hurt for the 2F...and I always used my stairs that way, I didn't know they had another purpose since the default setting for the stairs has you unable to walk past that last step at the top.

 

I personally don't mind the battler, but I could tone the colors down just a notch. It's hard for me to color it exactly like a RTP, because they have a lot of textures and blends. But I battle tested with it, and it seems to blend well with the graphics.\

 

EDIT: I just fixed the doorways and I added the menu screen I'm using which also shows my characters in the party.