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zane203

New Art Upload, CRITIQUE PLEASE

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ok so these are just a few new pics of my art work

 

before you point out obvious flaws, this is the uncleaned version, ( i make 2 version after i scan art, a clean version ((when i digitally fix minor mistakes, shade errors due to mah scanner, and ect.)) and a color version eventually.

 

anyways enjoy-

 

The Dangerous Setzune Zane

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The Gorgeous Scarlet ZenUrufu

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The Infamous Marked, The man who never misses

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I Plan to use these for my characters introduction screens. Need to find a song for Marked xD maybe "The Suns Gonna Rise" or something lol.

 

please tell me what you think =3

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Looks very good but on the 1st one why is there a bandage on his tail?

But if you were showing light it all depends on the color of the hair also.

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lol yea its light, the fur is white, so when i get to the shadowing i have the lighted area lighter and blur it into the fur ^_^

 

but your bandage tail gives me an idea on what to draw next =o

 

 

>=3 (muhahahaha)

 

thanks for the compliments guys

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(You didn't write in pink!!!)

 

I actually think that is supposed to be shine...

 

 

Lookin' good zane! The feet look a little weird, but other than that, with a little photoshop to bring some color, they'd be awesome.

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lol yea feet are the hardest thing for me to draw, then hands xD, well practice makes perfect so eh =3

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The font started to hurt my eyes and was way to hard to read. Its very hard when i have a very bright and glossy screen. The most glossy screen any one has ever seen in my town.

Marked. Hmm.......???

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