My Character Designs

[LegacyX 4]

Hello RMXPU community. (im new here and i hope this is the right place)

 

I have done a piece of art for my game "Blackfire". And i was wondering if anyone could give me some Constuctive critism.

 

Any detail no matter how minor would be great.

 

 

 

 

Coloured in (My first attempt at CG);

 

heres a sprite im making of the one above :D

btw i changed the hair colour :P

 

thanks :D

[Polraudio 122]

WOW is all i can say. This is great. Wish i could do graphics.

[LegacyX 4]

WOW is all i can say. This is great. Wish i could do graphics.

 

thanks, im hopefuly trying to do come Originaly art for the game. Im also trying my hand at spriting. But i'm glad you like it.

[zane203 8]

bruh, there's this site with a photoshop tut that teaches you from exact lining to coloring and what not with basics for scanned artwork.

 

if you're like me and you dont have Adobe Illustrator... because your comp dosnt have enough ram... ... ... ... >_<+ ... then its pwnage man. =3

 

other than that AWESOME DUDE! i like the rosy effects lol

[LegacyX 4]

bruh, there's this site with a photoshop tut that teaches you from exact lining to coloring and what not with basics for scanned artwork.

 

if you're like me and you dont have Adobe Illustrator... because your comp dosnt have enough ram... ... ... ... >_<+ ... then its pwnage man. =3

 

other than that AWESOME DUDE! i like the rosy effects lol

 

Thanks, im glad you like it too :D

 

i also made a sprite for it, so ill upload that now

[LonelyShadow 0]

Pretty cool, I like it alot...

[Ratty524 0]

Looks stiff. The top colored piece generally has a pretty small body and the lineart and the bottom, colored piece has eyes too close together. You need to base your distorted proportions on real proportions. The real human face tends to have eyes that are about one eye space apart from each other. Also the human skeleton is made of several arcs, not straight lines. You just need to draw from life more.

[LegacyX 4]

Looks stiff. The top colored piece generally has a pretty small body and the lineart and the bottom, colored piece has eyes too close together. You need to base your distorted proportions on real proportions. The real human face tends to have eyes that are about one eye space apart from each other. Also the human skeleton is made of several arcs, not straight lines. You just need to draw from life more.

 

 

Ok thanks for the information, ill keep that in mind next time :D

[Lato 1]

Well well well, Hmm id say the drawings are a bit cartoon like, and proportion is off, however I do like the char sprite, and good spriting is such a pain to do.

[Arkbennett 16]

You are better than me for surely, the only thing I see that you could work on is proportion, head shape, and body part angling.

[Noob Saibot 38]

Well well well, Hmm id say the drawings are a bit cartoon like, and proportion is off, however I do like the char sprite, and good spriting is such a pain to do.

 

Cartoony....can you see the drawing pad? And proportion may be off, but with practice he/she will get better.

[ShinkuAura 15]

Awsome Wonderful art! people are getting good at anime and stuff :D

[CrimsonInferno 35]

Great work, Legacy! I like it, especially how you colored it :P

 

Good job! :alright:

[FranklinX 37]

This is very nice. Please show us the finish touches on the character sets.

[LegacyX 4]

Hehe thanks, been a while. I been doing allot more since now i have my graphics tablet.

 

also im a Guy, just before anyone gets confused.

 

heres one of my latest.

 

 

This was my first attempt using my graphics tablet, and i had very unsteady hands that day.

[FranklinX 37]

Do you have character sets for your earlier designs?

[LegacyX 4]

i dont have a finished Set. and its not something i would be posting if it wasfinished. Sorry ^^;

[Dark Den 4]

Wow, your sprites are great. I have never made a sprite my self cause my art sucks.