Need criticism

[Kiriashi 117]

Hey guys!

 

 

I need some constructive criticism on this title screen I made.

 

The bottom part with waves is unfinished/beta. I don't know if I want that there. Anyways, tell me what you think.

 

 

Thanks, Kiriashi~

 

 

P.S. This may or may not be a title screen to a game in the works. :mellow:

[Nisage 31]

I like how "Ingenium" looks, but not so much for the white waves. Try making something that'll match the Ingenium, maybe a grass field/meadow thing to match the purple/blue grass in the picture already, maybe.... I'm not really sure what you should put in the white area, sorry.

[Polraudio 122]

Make everything kind of blend. what kind of waves are they. Cloud Waves? Because they look like clouds to me.

[Kiriashi 117]

They are waves of water being ripped apart by wind.

 

 

Newer image^^

 

And Nisage, I'm going to have a "Start Game, Load Save File, Credits, Exit" kind of thing down there, in a ring. Well that is if I can get someone to script it for me. :{

[FranklinX 37]

I like the name area. It looks very good. The only thing I don't like are the white waves. It does not seem to fit in.

[Kiriashi 117]

(Are you commenting on the older picture?)

 

Keep in mind that there is going to be a menu there!

 

 

I'm trying to make them fit, but I think it's good that they clash. It's supposed to look torn apart.

 

 

Also, what do you think of,the blue color in the newer picture.

[zane203 8]

well man i like both of em, i would either ONE suggest these though

 

-Leave as it is with your new one, Its good

-Add a dark kinda feel (if you want it dark), or a glowey whiteness if you want it light

-Take a screen shot of the game and put it on the lowest layer with the other layer being a overlay to have a background ; i think you'd have something awesome if you tried

 

 

BUT let me just say these are just ideas i can imagine just by thinking... lol =3

 

non the less both of them are awesome ^_^