New picture for character introduction [unclean]

[zane203 8]

this is a picture i just got to scan, now that its scan i will begin my cleaning process and ect =3.

 

 

please comment and say where i could improve on basic drawing (besides the small mess ups in inking lawl =3)

[Derek 3]

I looks like you like most people, attempt to draw the picture as a whole.

There are two people in this picture. Have you ever tried drawing them separately??

[zane203 8]

yea lol, im not a person who is good at proportions x.X unless i go full out with drawing a measuring scale/ common eye vectors and ect... lol