[XP] Not so good at storywriting

[ShinyToyGuns 29]

Hey all,

As some of you may have seen, I've started making a game called "The Coming Storm"...HOWEVER, it has been brought to my attention that I need some sort of storyline for this game...Which is why I come to you guys with a request. If any of you are remotely good at writing storylines or plots, or knows of some tutorials that can teach me how to build a storyline, it would be much appreciated. If you are able to help me, please either hit me up here or on msn ( J_Papelbon2009@hotmail.com (also my email) ). Basically the only details I have about the game atm are that the player (you) will be playing the "villains". Thanks in advance.

~Steven a.k.a. ShinyToyGuns~

[darkcieran 1]

okay what do you need?

[ShinyToyGuns 29]

Basically a storywriter for my game, or any sort of tutorial for storywriting I guess :P

[darkcieran 1]

alright. i think i can help you out. give me all the details.

and in helping you out i can give you pointers in developing your story.

[miguel1 17]

Ok i have some idieas:

1- You work in a company, and in that company you are a professional killer :P . but while you were doing a mission, you found out the the company has bretayed, and is trying to get rid of you.

You then seek revenge, trying to get the company down.

And you will also be helped by soldeirs who had been in exile, or something.

 

This is like, you are bad, in the begginig (you kill people, so that makes you bad, kinda :lol: ), and then the game is all about revenge.

 

2- or, you are good at the begging of the game, but after an acident ( something that changes the hero's life, like your town is destroyed or someone you cared about is murdered, something like that) you start blaming the world for all that's wrong and you will try to destroy it for what they did to you. LOL

 

I know these ideias suck, but you dind't give us much information :P

 

If you want me to give more detail's of a story, just say so ( i personally like the first, :D )

[ShinyToyGuns 29]

alright. i think i can help you out. give me all the details.

and in helping you out i can give you pointers in developing your story.

 

got MSN or AIM? if so, could you add me? ( J_Papelbon2009@hotmail.com ), ( peopleeater08 ) It might be easier to talk that way.

[miguel1 17]

ops! wrong post

How can i delete this post?

[ShinyToyGuns 29]

don't think you can lol...don't worry about it though :P

[darkcieran 1]

i have aim. my screenname is inglellis and i'm on all the time. even if it says i'm not.

[ShinyToyGuns 29]

I just added you...dunno if it will work though...pidgin is iffy sometimes