Leon 55 Report post Posted December 2, 2009 We meet again, in the meadow grass, Approaching each other, and alas. In your eyes of haunting blue, I lost my self, and then I knew. A touching caress, upon your cheek, Our feelings show, we need not speak. Rosy lips smile, and an ardent embrace This emotion, no one can erase. In my mind you shall always roam. Until the day I return to the loam. You lean up, giving an endearing kiss. In your heart, I find eternal bliss. All too real, or so it does seem, Until I awaken from this dream. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaylen 1 Report post Posted December 2, 2009 Aww... That's pretty. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Leon 55 Report post Posted December 2, 2009 Heh... thanks. When the muse hits, I just write. That one came to me one night. There is a better version, more crisp, better imagery, but it was lost in my recent computer failure. I think one person has it, but they don't have internet. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaylen 1 Report post Posted December 2, 2009 I used to write a little. I never finished any of my stories but the content I did have was good. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tomo2000 60 Report post Posted December 2, 2009 About half way through reading I was prepared to say "Looks like Leon's gotta girlfriend" until the end when I realised that you, my friend, have really odd dreams :) . Anyway, very nice poem, I am actually working on one, usually the lyrics come to me after I just wake up and thats why I've been napping in english :) . Again, very nice poem. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Leon 55 Report post Posted December 2, 2009 I used to write a little. I never finished any of my stories but the content I did have was good. You should write again. Just free-form it. Write with your mind blank, and see what appears. You'd be amazed. About half way through reading I was prepared to say "Looks like Leon's gotta girlfriend" until the end when I realised that you, my friend, have really odd dreams :) . Anyway, very nice poem, I am actually working on one, usually the lyrics come to me after I just wake up and thats why I've been napping in english :) . Again, very nice poem. Lol. Dreams are our hearts desire. Anyway, when done, post it! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wyzrd 12 Report post Posted December 2, 2009 Good Leon. I like it. Your point was gotten across and imagery was there. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiriashi 117 Report post Posted December 2, 2009 That was a beautiful poem. :lol: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaylen 1 Report post Posted December 2, 2009 I don't have anything productive to say, but in Wyzrd's sig is says '"A coward dies a thousand deaths. A soldier dies once."'. Just like to say that doesn't make any sense. A coward dies just as many times as anyone else, the only difference is a coward is afraid to die whereas a soldier thinks they have to die just because someone tells them to. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Leon 55 Report post Posted December 2, 2009 It means a cowards are dying on the inside, because they are always too afraid to take life by the horns. By not living, you may as well be dead. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaylen 1 Report post Posted December 2, 2009 I could see that reference if it didn't have the soldier part appended on the end. It makes it seem that to be brave, you need to die an unnecessary death for unjust causes. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Leon 55 Report post Posted December 2, 2009 The original quote from Shakespeare is 'A coward dies a thousand times, but the brave die but once.' His version is from Tupac, I believe. Anyway, I think this is getting off topic.. >.> and Pol will beat me mercilessly if that happens. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tomo2000 60 Report post Posted December 2, 2009 Dreams are our hearts desires? Does that include nightmares? Because, if it does, does that mean that I want a zombie infection to come? And when I finish my poem I'll post it :) . Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Leon 55 Report post Posted December 2, 2009 could be... i wouldn't mind a zombie invasion. You can call me Special Agent Kennedy! -Gives a steely look- Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tomo2000 60 Report post Posted December 2, 2009 Well, for the first week or two, maybe a bit longer or shorter depending on the person, you'd be having a heart attack. After that, you'd be getting used to it and, hopefully, will survive until then. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites