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Willow

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Hmm.... The shapes and proportions of the body are kinda off... The head is kinda oval shaped on a horizontal axis, rather than vertical... The feet, on the side views, kinda look like barely attached potatoes... And from behind he looks like his legs are detached while he walks because of the pink I guess... The mouth and cheeks make his face resemble a puffer fish... and the bright blue clothing with ... neon pink trimming? is a bit odd...

 

All in all it is kinda harsh on the eyes... On the side view, the hair shading is much nicer than on the front/back views. On the front view, the hair looks like a balloon kinda ... I think you need to focus the shadow and highlights there a little more evenly, instead of just at the edges where it makes the hair look inflated.

 

Personally, I'd leave the mouth off entirely before putting a little black dot there... it makes his cheeks look very round... Of course, if they're meant to be, it's perfect.

 

All in all, not very bad... I hope my critique helps! Best of luck with it!

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