Cjboy 2 Report post Posted June 29, 2010 I carefully made this Alcohol bottle made of felt and clay... It looks nice when you think about it... I can make a charset, but look at this old-style bottle and tell me what you think... Edit:Updated the sprite... looked bad in some areas... You can leave a reply and say you like it or not... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dark Den 4 Report post Posted June 29, 2010 i think it needs to shine a bit more Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Cjboy 2 Report post Posted June 29, 2010 Shades are simple... I can do that in no time... I made this in a half an hour... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Broken Messiah 20 Report post Posted June 29, 2010 Because we know the rtp would like a cold one between saving the world and script demos :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiriashi 117 Report post Posted June 29, 2010 CJ, please don't bump after only an HOUR! D: The sprites look cool, the beer on in particular. Try to do something for RMXP. ^_^ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Cjboy 2 Report post Posted June 29, 2010 Try to do something for RMXP. ^_^ Well Kiriashi... I can't do battlers... Only generic Real 2D... and also... JPEG'd items don't make my creations better at all... I'm ok with putting things on a template for Charsets... So, it really could take a while... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Chief 30 Report post Posted June 29, 2010 I dont mean to cause offense, and I'm sorry if I do, but the bottle, and... person? they really aren't good at all. The shaping is bad, the shading is terrible, and nothing really comes across as well done. I'm sorry, but I only offer this opinion as you seem to think your stuff is great, but for a beginner its not bad at all. edit: this is a bottle I made in about 15 minutes: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Cjboy 2 Report post Posted July 2, 2010 No offense taken man... I do a lot of outlining, rough spriting... I don't take too much time making sprites, That's where my job comes in, takes the time I have to work on stuff for here with you guys away from me... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dark Den 4 Report post Posted July 2, 2010 Thats a great bottle chief :alright: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Broken Messiah 20 Report post Posted July 2, 2010 I still like Cjboys more though. It has a label on it. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Chief 30 Report post Posted July 2, 2010 I still like Cjboys more though. It has a label on it. so, because his has a crappy label, its better than mine? take a look at his shading, his lineart, his colors and lack of contrast, and no hue shifting either. its garbage. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiriashi 117 Report post Posted July 2, 2010 It's just his opinion man. He can like whichever one he wants. Please do not insult other people's work either. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Chief 30 Report post Posted July 2, 2010 its not insulting, its pointing out flaws and critiquing. I do apologize for saying it was garbage though, that part was a bit far. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiriashi 117 Report post Posted July 2, 2010 The pointing out flaws part is fine. ^~^ Just make sure to keep it constructive criticism. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dark Den 4 Report post Posted July 3, 2010 Why is the title "new spriting teacher" ? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Chief 30 Report post Posted July 3, 2010 lol, because he feels that he is skilled enough to be teaching other people pixel art... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
gizmo00999 1 Report post Posted July 3, 2010 Nothing to lol about! -.- But yes, it is garbage... srsly...:D Mostly because... i can't really see the shading well, but i beleive it's a gradient? 0.oIf not- too many layers of colors with too little shading space between them. Lmao Chief, i have always wanted to learn that shading style, but never could T_T Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Broken Messiah 20 Report post Posted July 3, 2010 Alright I guess you got a point about the shading :sweatdrop: but his looks like a whiskey bottle Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Cjboy 2 Report post Posted July 5, 2010 Wait a second? When did my spriting get so popular? I don't know if I am good enough now... GAH! thanks Cheif you lowered my self esteem! Thanks alot now I think I might jump off a roof now and land in a garbage truck, and if I'm not dead I'll take my switchblade and... you'll see... lol just kidding... But seriously, you lowered my self esteem... wait what did I just say? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Cjboy 2 Report post Posted July 5, 2010 stupid double post... by the way gizmo, thank you so much for making Cheif's point more BOLD, that makes me feel special... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Chief 30 Report post Posted July 5, 2010 No, your self esteem should not be lowered. In all honesty, you really aren't good enough to be teaching others, I don't see hoe you think you are. you need to get a lot better in order to be even considering teaching others. That being said, this shouldn't stop you from doing what you're doing. You can only get better, but it will take time. Keep on working on pixel art, study other peoples art, read up on tutorials, and you'll get somewhere. Don't let me discourage you, I'm just being truthful. Theres nothing you can teach someone at this time. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Cjboy 2 Report post Posted July 15, 2010 eeh...... haven't een watching this, I know your being truthful, but there is a saying that says, "At times the truth hurts". In this case it kinda hurt my self esteem, I have been studying, I have been practicing, it's just time that bugs me from doing this! I'd like to teach you guys what they taught me at Digital Arts, sometimes i just can't think about my work long enough to think it's good. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
