CrimsonInferno 35 Report post Posted August 1, 2010 (edited) Everything is deleted; I opt'd out of the novel. I wasn't getting enough time in to help write it, so my friend has taken full control over it. I only knew how to write two characters anyways. lol I'll try and write something short later, after I finish my game. I was thinking about making a ten chapter novel of various events, or the same but mixed with other games that are not just FF related. Edited December 23, 2012 by CrimsonInferno 1 Jon Bon reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rgangsta 43 Report post Posted August 1, 2010 :shok: That's a lot to read. I'm not into FF, but for you, I'll download this page and read it. I'll be back with my comments. :P .:EDIT:. Just finished reading chapter 1. The story is very captivating. It pulled me in and I couldn't stop reading. Unfortunately, I'm sleepy, so I'll read chapter 2 after a good nap. :biggrin_002: All I could find were just misspelled words. 1. "The men decided to exist the machines" 2. "Slowly, her stomach started to settled down" 3. "When he came back in, he was carrying a try with a bowl of soup and crackers" Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
CrimsonInferno 35 Report post Posted August 1, 2010 Thanks, Rgangsta! I can't wait to see what you think! :) I hope you like it ^,^ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rgangsta 43 Report post Posted August 1, 2010 Thanks, Rgangsta! I can't wait to see what you think! :) I hope you like it ^,^ Don't mention it. I'm just here to help. :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
CrimsonInferno 35 Report post Posted August 4, 2010 (edited) Deleted. Edited December 23, 2012 by CrimsonInferno Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiriashi 117 Report post Posted August 4, 2010 Do you have a .doc file of this? That way I can make changes a whole lot easier. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Noob Saibot 38 Report post Posted August 4, 2010 Not to bad, not much for FF stories, but alright. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
CrimsonInferno 35 Report post Posted August 4, 2010 Do you have a .doc file of this? That way I can make changes a whole lot easier. I sure do ^,^ um, I'll need to know which site you'd like it upload to though :) *if that's what you mean lol* Not to bad, not much for FF stories, but alright. You don't? Well, that's fine, it makes me actually feel a lot better about it. Thanks! :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Noob Saibot 38 Report post Posted August 4, 2010 You don't? Well, that's fine, it makes me actually feel a lot better about it. Thanks! :D FF = Fan Fiction not Final Fantasy I only skimmed through it, i'll print it out and read it (I hate reading from a monitor). Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
CrimsonInferno 35 Report post Posted August 4, 2010 (edited) FF = Fan Fiction not Final Fantasy I only skimmed through it, i'll print it out and read it (I hate reading from a monitor). I know :> The "You don't?" was meant to be "You aren't?" lol *I was up all night helping my almost blind cat...so I'm a little tired :<* Edited December 23, 2012 by CrimsonInferno Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Noob Saibot 38 Report post Posted August 4, 2010 edit: Hehehehe, my sisters hate reading on monitor too. That's one of the reasons they won't read my novel :P I have a Nook (e-reader), but it's simple to use with buttons to turn page...no scrolling. I write as well, working on 3 novels and a book that will have some short stories in it. 1 CrimsonInferno reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
CrimsonInferno 35 Report post Posted August 28, 2010 (edited) Deleted. Man I suck.... Edited December 23, 2012 by CrimsonInferno Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
CrimsonInferno 35 Report post Posted February 16, 2011 (edited) Deleted; sorry for the emptiness guys. Edited December 23, 2012 by CrimsonInferno Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiriashi 117 Report post Posted February 16, 2011 I'll read it when I get the chance, but good for you for working on it! :3 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
CrimsonInferno 35 Report post Posted February 20, 2011 Thanks Kiriashi! I hope I got the characters well. My reviewers say I do, but I hope I'm not too off. :sweatdrop: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
CrimsonInferno 35 Report post Posted March 9, 2011 (edited) Deleted. Edited December 23, 2012 by CrimsonInferno Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
CrimsonInferno 35 Report post Posted April 12, 2011 (edited) Deleted once again. Edited December 23, 2012 by CrimsonInferno Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
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ShinGamix 1 Report post Posted October 11, 2012 AHHH! Nothing posted in a year!! Why!! I want to read more... (crying) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites