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Everything is deleted; I opt'd out of the novel. I wasn't getting enough time in to help write it, so my friend has taken full control over it. I only knew how to write two characters anyways. lol

 

I'll try and write something short later, after I finish my game. I was thinking about making a ten chapter novel of various events, or the same but mixed with other games that are not just FF related.

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:shok: That's a lot to read. I'm not into FF, but for you, I'll download this page and read it. I'll be back with my comments. :P

 

.:EDIT:.

Just finished reading chapter 1. The story is very captivating. It pulled me in and I couldn't stop reading. Unfortunately, I'm sleepy, so I'll read chapter 2 after a good nap. :biggrin_002:

All I could find were just misspelled words.

1. "The men decided to exist the machines"

2. "Slowly, her stomach started to settled down"

3. "When he came back in, he was carrying a try with a bowl of soup and crackers"

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Thanks, Rgangsta! I can't wait to see what you think! :)

I hope you like it ^,^

 

Don't mention it. I'm just here to help. :P

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Do you have a .doc file of this? That way I can make changes a whole lot easier.

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Do you have a .doc file of this? That way I can make changes a whole lot easier.

 

I sure do ^,^ um, I'll need to know which site you'd like it upload to though :)

*if that's what you mean lol*

 

Not to bad, not much for FF stories, but alright.

You don't?

 

Well, that's fine, it makes me actually feel a lot better about it. Thanks! :D

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You don't?

 

Well, that's fine, it makes me actually feel a lot better about it. Thanks! :D

 

FF = Fan Fiction not Final Fantasy

 

 

I only skimmed through it, i'll print it out and read it (I hate reading from a monitor).

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FF = Fan Fiction not Final Fantasy

 

 

I only skimmed through it, i'll print it out and read it (I hate reading from a monitor).

I know :> The "You don't?" was meant to be "You aren't?" lol

*I was up all night helping my almost blind cat...so I'm a little tired :<*

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Hehehehe, my sisters hate reading on monitor too. That's one of the reasons they won't read my novel :P

 

I have a Nook (e-reader), but it's simple to use with buttons to turn page...no scrolling. I write as well, working on 3 novels and a book that will have some short stories in it.

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Thanks Kiriashi! I hope I got the characters well. My reviewers say I do, but I hope I'm not too off. :sweatdrop:

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AHHH! Nothing posted in a year!! Why!! I want to read more... (crying)

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