Need some Dialog help?!

[jporter917 0]

I have a scene in my game between two people I need some help making the dialog seem genuine.?

 

Arugement between Good Guy - Erro and Bad Guy - Mevri.

 

\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\//\/\/\\/\/\/

 

Erro - Mevri do not remove the Opacity Jewels!

 

Mevri - Ahaha! Foolish old man, the Jewels are mine! With them I will take over this kingdom and plung it into total darkness!

 

Erro - No!

 

<some animations>

 

Meveri - Mahah, Now this world is mine!

 

<some more animations, Mevri teleports>

 

Erro - Mevri!

 

<End Scene>

 

I feel it needs to be more "powerful" then that any ideas?

[Broken Messiah 20]

Erro: You must not intervere with this worlds fate!

 

Mveri: Silence! They will grant me power beyond my wildest dreams, and I use them in my conquest of this kingdom! Then the day will come when I plunge this realm into the endless void of darkness!

 

Erro: Your vision will never be realized! Not while I breathe!

 

(EPIC FIGHT WITH PEOPLE FIRIN THIER LAZAHS)

 

Mevri: BWA AH AH AH AH AH! Stupid old man, to think you'll live to see eternal darkness!

 

(TELEPORTS; BECAUSE EVERYONE KNOWS BADGUYS CAN)

 

 

 

 

 

[jporter917 0]

Erro: You must not intervere with this worlds fate!

 

Mveri: Silence! They will grant me power beyond my wildest dreams, and I use them in my conquest of this kingdom! Then the day will come when I plunge this realm into the endless void of darkness!

 

Erro: Your vision will never be realized! Not while I breathe!

 

(EPIC FIGHT WITH PEOPLE FIRIN THIER LAZAHS)

 

Mevri: BWA AH AH AH AH AH! Stupid old man, to think you'll live to see eternal darkness!

 

(TELEPORTS; BECAUSE EVERYONE KNOWS BADGUYS CAN)

 

 

 

<3 <3 Thank you, much better!

 

I am using UMS system I am still having some trouble getting it to do what I want. If you are familiar with this script could you possibly put in the required commands for me? I want their names displayed above their text boxes and their face plates to be displayed too. Erro on the right when he is talking and Mervi on the left when he is talking. I can get the names, but I have problems with the change of pictures and alignment.

Edited August 13, 2010 by jporter917

[Kiriashi 117]

If you open up the script and look at the comments at the top, you can figure out all of the commands.

[jporter917 0]

I have caught on a little bit, but I've decide not to use the face plates it is too hard to find faces for all my characters. lol. Thanks again for the dialog help I will prolly be posting for more soon. >.< Thanks again again.

[jporter917 0]

Need some more help. I have a story scene that says the following;

 

The world of Hiodro is in great peril and on the verge of slipping into complete darkness.

 

The tree powerful magical gem stones known as the Opacity Jewels that control the world's harmony and color are threatened by an evil force by the name of Mervi.

 

It is now up to you to stop Mervi and save the world.

 

You adventure starts now.

 

<><><><><><><><><>

 

After which a player will come into contact with a character the is the guardian of the worlds. He then will explain the below in a little better detail and basically say he picked you to help him save Hiodro and stop Mervi. Now sure what to have him say exactly. Any ideas