ShinkuAura 15 Report post Posted August 30, 2010 (edited) Welcome to Omar's RPG MAKER Game reviews! You can Post a game in this topic, it can be a Demo and a full game. but before you can post a game please notice that you must be a member of the RPG Maker Unlimited community and have at least 10 fourm post to even post a game. You can submit a game of any genre, before you do please copy and edit to your game information. Name of the game GameType (Demo, Full) Game Engine (RPG MAKER XP, VX, ACE) Game Author or Game Company Game Genre Game Cover (Not really recommanded) Game Page (If you do not have a game page then make one here) http://www.gdunlimited.net/forums/forum/87-established-games/ Author's Comment (Not really recommanded, the author can express themself in anyway in this section) Game Reviews will now feature Written review Categories Rating Reviewer's comments Pro and Cons Final Rating (will not add the categories rating score, i prefer to give it my own score) Categories: Story Graphics Eventing Custom Scripts (battle systems, new features are considered custom scripts) Mapping/tilesets Music/soundtrack. Please note that games may take days or even weeks to get the review information. and this does not affect games that have been submitted before Febuary 1, 2013 Please Post your game! Thank you! -Omar Edited July 6, 2015 by Omar510 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tomo2000 60 Report post Posted August 30, 2010 Hey, Omar. This looks great. Reckon you'd be able to review Hope Afloat? Thanks :alright: Download Link: ....................Click Me Name of the game: ...............Hope Afloat Name of the Game Engine: ..RPG Maker XP Name of the Author: .............Me, Tomo2000 Genre:...................................Action, Post-Apocolyptic Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ShinkuAura 15 Report post Posted August 31, 2010 Game Review for Hope Afloat v8 (Version Eight) So You don't like Zombie Horror Games on a RPG 2D Game? Well if you don't try "Hope Afloat" Your Losing Alot of stuff mate Hope Afloat Created by Tomo2000 Game Engine RPG Maker XP Genere: Action,Post Apocolyptic Story: So the Games Starts with a Guy Name Kyle Hiding Behind the Bed Trying To survive from the Raid of Zombies that is in every place so you start out Escaping from the Zombies to the Raft and that raft is where you can Save your Progress and travel. Presention: you can travel to places like towns and Military Bases where you can find Equipment so you can survive. also each town has some Puzzles and Mini-games and Weapons. you can find Alot of things like a Car. Each Place has it's Own Stuff and it's really cool the gameplay doesn't repeats like other Horror games i play that requieres shooting zombies and hiding from them and with the day and night system. The Game Requieres Some thinking and Stradegy, the game has so many events that really really makes it a true Horror game. Graphics: The Graphics is Just Wonderful and it doesn't lack anything you'll feel like if your in the game.. Aldo The Graphics Can Get a little Boring Because it's repeats too much and you'll feel like your in the same town sometimes but the Graphics shine and it's really dark like if the World just ended the darkness is perfect the Zombie graphic is perfect even thought the zombie graphics repeats alot sometimes i think why isn't any women zombies appear or some dog graphics. the Building Graphics is Great but once again it repeats alot but there's ton of graphics that the game has like cars people and buildings the graphics really shine. Scripts: The Scripts are Just wonderful and well kinda similar, it's Actually The Ol' Resident evil 1-3's Interface. but the Overall Scripts are okay. because you have some Racing Mini-games/Missions for example very good idea. Music: The Music score Actually Makes the Game More sadder and sometimes in some serious times and it kinda repeatative but it's really fits with the game music sometimes tells you if there's a sad moment or a happy moment and i like that. Mapping: Mapping is Very good There's Really No Errors on it and i like the Military Base 1 it felt that it was really destroyed and the mapping is really what a RPG game wants, "Good mapping" Even though there's some Maps that really need some little bit of work it kind of squared but most of the mapping is perfect and fits with the game. Dialog: The charcter Really makes the game more interesting and sometimes boring it really needs some Work on it to make it more intresting. Features: A Save System, A travel System, A Herb healing System (Like Resident evil), and Awsome mini-games/Missions. PROS: It's Neat The Battle System is Great Mapping is Wonderful Short Puzzles Alot of Zombies Awsome Features Alot of Towns Great Darkness CONS: Small Maps/towns going back to the raft sometimes is annoying Traveling System Isn't Very Good because you can travel once a day Zombies Graphics is To repetitive. Rating: 9.2 Wonderful 1 Tomo2000 reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tomo2000 60 Report post Posted August 31, 2010 Wow, this is a really great review. I wasn't expecting to get higher than Awesome. As I was reading I found my self saying "Hey, I did do that, didn't I?"; you noticed some things not even I had noticed, and I made it :biggrin_002: . I've just had a rather boring day at school and this has made my day. Thanks a heap. +Rep. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
FranklinX 37 Report post Posted August 31, 2010 I like this idea. I think the forums should make you the reviewer and post your reviews on the front page. What do you guys think? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rgangsta 43 Report post Posted August 31, 2010 I think it's a good idea too. That way, there's more options instead of the standard screenshot. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Valdred 1 Report post Posted August 31, 2010 My critique of your review: you did well, but for the storypart, you didn't really say much about the story :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Polraudio 122 Report post Posted August 31, 2010 Nice idea Omar. I think i will have you review mine as soon as i make some fixes. You have inspired me to work on it more thanks :alright:. You do an awesome job at reviewing. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Broken Messiah 20 Report post Posted September 1, 2010 Code Geass: Painful Memories RMVX Broken Messiah Strategic, Sim, RPG Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ShinkuAura 15 Report post Posted September 2, 2010 Wow, this is a really great review. I wasn't expecting to get higher than Awesome. As I was reading I found my self saying "Hey, I did do that, didn't I?"; you noticed some things not even I had noticed, and I made it :biggrin_002: . I've just had a rather boring day at school and this has made my day. Thanks a heap. +Rep. Keep Doing that Game It could get better I think it's a good idea too. That way, there's more options instead of the standard screenshot. Video Review? lol My critique of your review: you did well, but for the storypart, you didn't really say much about the story :P It's Pretty Much Spoilers Play the game to know. Nice idea Omar. I think i will have you review mine as soon as i make some fixes. You have inspired me to work on it more thanks :alright:. You do an awesome job at reviewing. Just Doing my Job. Code Geass: Painful Memories RMVX Broken Messiah Strategic, Sim, RPG Going to review your game. BTW Kiriashi will be a review at some games and he will give me his review for sometimes im not on. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ShinkuAura 15 Report post Posted September 2, 2010 (edited) Game Demo Review For Code Grass V1 (Version One) Name of the Game: Code Grass: Painful Memories Engine: RPG Maker VX Name Of the Autor: Broken Messiah Genere: Strategic, Sim, RPG So You want to Be unbored and try something new? you like RTP Games? Well Mate. Try Code Grass Painful Memories. Story: Well in the Start there is a Blackout Cutscene and a mother give birth to a baby, You can choose the Gender and you choose your name for the story the main character's Name is Blair. the story starts with Britannia The UK Renamed Area 11 that Invades Japan. And you Must Save japan without dieing. Graphics: To be Honest the Graphics Shine with colorful scenes it makes the game more Intresting and Beutiful, the game has Very good Pictures and it's Drawn well Credits to the Author it's just so Beutiful that The Game itself Is Introduced. Even Though the Picture really makes the game a little slow and i know it's not my computer. Presentation: The Game Has things you can do it really beutiful and it's doesn't disapoint it really shines with the graphics and the Scene is Well Introduced too. aldo there's some scenes i don't understand but i later re-played the game and i understand more. the game has Dramatic Scenes and Suspention, you'll really really want to know the Next Scene. Mapping: Mapping isn't Introduced until the ultamate battle and well it need work on some Levels but that doesn't take away the fun there's Awsome Mapping too and i respect that because mapping is just perfect in alot of places it really shines alot and it's just beutiful i have notthing to type anymore. Music: The Music is really Nesesary for a game and it's really Good and it fits the music is just so Beutiful it's Perfect for this game and it fits in every scene in every level in every parts of the game I really like it the game is much more better with the music and every Place i go Music is there and it's perfect Scripts: The Game is For Thinkers so if you don't like to think i recommand you to stay away from this game it's a RPG RTP game and i enjoy RTPS and the battles are epic the A.I is Even Smart just perfect to think it really perfect with a Cool Backgrounds and battles Also Some Cool Mini Games Like a Dance Arcade i never had Dance Dance Revolution because i hate dancing but it's pretty much ok on a rpg game the scripts are great and it makes the game Perfect. Dialog: Dialog in this game is Massive and it makes the Game more Darker and Serious the game is perfect for the strong Story telling and the charcters always have something intresting to say your lelouch and you can control people's mind and you can choose what's the destany of another charcter if you want to kill someone or just trick someone just great the game never gets old. PROS: Strong Story Telling Colorful Picture/Animations alots of Events Great A.I Outstanding Mapping OutStanding Charcters Alot of Activitys Great Battle A.I CONS: Long Cutscenes Story can be a little Confusing Some Gliches (PM me to tell you the gliches) Some Unmatched Charcter faces. Some Events repeats Rating: 9.8 Extream! Edited September 2, 2010 by Omar510 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dark Den 4 Report post Posted September 3, 2010 A very good review Omar the review wants me to wait the 1hour or more i would need to download code geass The only thing i found wrong were the spellings like geass was spelled grass and beautiful was spelled beutiful But other than that :5: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ProjectTrinity 8 Report post Posted September 3, 2010 (edited) A symbiotic relationship between reviewer and creator. I like this idea. I like it lots. Al'asuiaga'ta is a 1 hour game. Totally qualifies to be posted here, right? =D Also, downloading the Geass game. :3 Edit: Whoops. I don't have VX. D= Edited September 3, 2010 by ProjectTrinity Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiriashi 117 Report post Posted September 3, 2010 Sure Symphony, I'll review your game. Just make a formal post for it and I'll get to it. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ProjectTrinity 8 Report post Posted October 2, 2010 Download Link: ....................Click Me Name of the game: ...............Al'asuiaga'ta Name of the Game Engine: ..RPG Maker XP Name of the Author: .............Johnathan Johnson/ProjectTrinity Genre:...................................RPG / Test Comes out I've been too busy to even do something strictly for myself. D'= But it's here now! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Leon 55 Report post Posted October 2, 2010 What the heck? I'll give this a shot. Kiri has wanted me to finish my pursuit of a project I was working on, but I am uncertain if it is worth it. Maybe a not-so-bias review will perk me back up: Name: Elements of Travance Engine: RmXP Author: Leon Genre: RPG No Cover art. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Broken Messiah 20 Report post Posted October 2, 2010 I will just add that Al'asuiaga'ta is freaking great! Best front view battle system I've seen and love the voices! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ProjectTrinity 8 Report post Posted October 2, 2010 I will just add that Al'asuiaga'ta is freaking great! Best front view battle system I've seen and love the voices! Thank you much. And I agree that it's among the best front battle systems I found. The only flaw about said system is that condition branches and common events take you out of the sub-menus during battle. Taking away the element of using different voice tracks during battle. ;_; Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
romeir90 1 Report post Posted November 13, 2010 (edited) Thank you much. And I agree that it's among the best front battle systems I found. The only flaw about said system is that condition branches and common events take you out of the sub-menus during battle. Taking away the element of using different voice tracks during battle. ;_; Maaaan! That game is sweeeet! You have to tell me, what battle system is that!? I find it addictive, you have to be on your toes at every turn, it takes away the borig part of RPG's and gives it an action feeling. Man I even died ten times in about 20 minutes and I still want to play it!![insert loud fangirl sqweee here] And the voices, I love the voices! It is great a jump from all the other games I've played, are the voice actors friends of your's? or are they pro's? Oh man I need another play in that, I tell you, it's addictive!! (Sorry if I sound like drug usser there but really, it's awesome!) Can anybody else tell me what system is that? Edited November 15, 2010 by romeir90 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Broken Messiah 20 Report post Posted December 9, 2010 (edited) I hope this isn't necroposting, but everyone should really try the game Eternal Grace ! It is really good and has supurb graphics and music! The game is really challenging and fun and could eventually be something that you'd see commercially available! I'd give it: :5: Downfall: Controls can be wierd, but then most games made like that are that way, so maybe not. PS: Just realized that Omar510 thought I mispelled Grass as Geass but it is in fact spelled Geass lol, funny scenario and understandable since E is next to R on the keyboard lol Edited December 9, 2010 by Broken Messiah Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ProjectTrinity 8 Report post Posted December 12, 2010 Maaaan! That game is sweeeet! You have to tell me, what battle system is that!? I find it addictive, you have to be on your toes at every turn, it takes away the borig part of RPG's and gives it an action feeling. Man I even died ten times in about 20 minutes and I still want to play it!![insert loud fangirl sqweee here] And the voices, I love the voices! It is great a jump from all the other games I've played, are the voice actors friends of your's? or are they pro's? Oh man I need another play in that, I tell you, it's addictive!! (Sorry if I sound like drug usser there but really, it's awesome!) Can anybody else tell me what system is that? 1 Month late I am. lol I'm not too sure on the name of the battle system, for it was Japanese, but I just call it the Cogwheel System. If you're still here, I could always give ya the script in case you don't know where to go on my actual game file. =p But glad you liked the speed! It is what kept me using the front view. ^_^ As for the voice actors, Tomoyo Ichijouji/Jasmin, Aziral/Kattis, Soldjango/Obbligato, TheShadowVoice/Pizzicato, and my sister/Vira are all friends (or family!) of mine. ^^ While Mewwinxmelody/Jessica and NikkiKora/Alana are those who were willing to help out. :3 And they all have a knack for acting, but none are "officially" pro. lol You can expect Tomoyo/Jasmin to stick around, however, since she's in pretty much all of my big productions due to her multi-talented and dedicated ways. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
IamDarkspawn 0 Report post Posted September 22, 2011 do we personally send them to you or post them up... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ShinkuAura 15 Report post Posted January 17, 2013 Oh I forgot about this. Wow so much games i'd missed and Kiriashi didn't review them either :( I want to revive this topic, so generally i'm doing this again with or without Mark's permission. this isn't for full games. Post your Demos here and if you've posted them then repost again. I want to play a nice game for a while. *Note I do not have ACE so if your doing one on the engine please wait for a 3 day wait. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Marked 197 Report post Posted January 17, 2013 with or without Mark's permission. You're not doing it without my permission. You have my implied permission until I say otherwise, which of course, I wouldn't. I didn't think I needed to say that but apparently I do since for some reason I cannot comprehend you decided to include that in your post. Wow so much games i'd missed and Kiriashi didn't review them either :( Kiriashi is gone. He doesn't commit to things. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ShinkuAura 15 Report post Posted January 17, 2013 Just ignore me i'm like this sometimes. Nothing's. True, everything is permitted ;) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Marked 197 Report post Posted January 17, 2013 That's right, go nuts. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tomo2000 60 Report post Posted January 17, 2013 Hey man, glad to know you're reviewing again :) Game Name: Legacy Game Engine: RPG Maker XP Author: Me; Tomo2000. Genre: Action/Post-Apocalyptic Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ShinkuAura 15 Report post Posted January 17, 2013 your only fail is not having a Download link. invaild review. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tomo2000 60 Report post Posted January 17, 2013 your only fail is not having a Download link. invaild review. Oops, sorry man, I completely forgot xD Updated. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bob423 52 Report post Posted January 18, 2013 Name: The Hidden City of Arcatis (it's a demo) Engine: RMXP Author: Bob423 Genre: Action RPG, Fantasy, Adventure http://www.gdunlimited.net/forums/topic/6758-the-hidden-city-of-arcatis-demo/ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites