Feedback on my mapping?

[Kevin.ds 28]

Hey there ! iam currently working on a city for my project and ill be posting a screenshot on how it looks every hour ( unless iam sleeping )

 

1 hour

 

2 hours

 

 

Edited June 1, 2011 by Kevin.ds

[rgangsta 43]

Beautiful. Great job. I am honetsly not that creative with XP.

[Kevin.ds 28]

Beautiful. Great job. I am honetsly not that creative with XP.

 

lol thx , me neither iam suprised i manage to do what I did haha

[Polraudio 122]

Not really sure i can see anything to fix.

 

Actually a few things i see. The tree to the loawer left and right in the 1st pic is a little off of the clif and looks odd.

 

Thats about all i can find.

[Kevin.ds 28]

Not really sure i can see anything to fix.

 

Actually a few things i see. The tree to the loawer left and right in the 1st pic is a little off of the clif and looks odd.

 

Thats about all i can find.

 

Saw that to :P , beside from that what do you think about them =)?

[Polraudio 122]

Saw that to :P , beside from that what do you think about them =)?

I think you did a great job on mapping. Way better than what i can do.

I see you found that sunlight thing you were looking for yesterday.

[Kevin.ds 28]

I think you did a great job on mapping. Way better than what i can do.

I see you found that sunlight thing you were looking for yesterday.

 

No I didnt haha , I just made a pic and it worked out lol. Iam stil learning :P i was working on my game and was looking for some inspiration, when I came across this guys mapping http://hypersnake22.deviantart.com/gallery/25405608 ... And I was like... öhh... my maps will never be good enough, so now Iam trying to improve :rolleyes:

Edited March 15, 2011 by Kevin.ds

[CrimsonInferno 35]

I like it, very much! :alright:

 

If I may suggest something though. Maybe making a few more differences in the cliffs? It would help add to the maps and make it look even better (though I do like your mapping! Honest! :3). And maybe more grass in the last screenshot with some flowers? And maybe you could add some lilie pads to the water? And if you would like some different fallen trees, flowers, mushrooms and other things, I could provide it for you :)

 

Overall, I think you did really good. Is this your first time mapping? If so, you are even better than I thought xD

[Midnite Reaper 2]

 

Here are my points.

 

In black: the dirt path has a square of grass around it. This is a different colour to the grass along one tile and so has an obvious split between the tiles.

In red: The seam is badly made. It looks as though the cliff just stops. Put the transparent section cliff bottom on to fix this.

In yellow: You are missing the inner corner tiles. Doesn't look nice.

In blue: Not so much a problem, but when you used the piece two wide, they are both middle pieces when they should have been outer pieces.

All of these are purely aesthetic, and barely detract from the beauty. Looks nice though.

Edited March 15, 2011 by Midnite Reaper

[Kevin.ds 28]

I like it, very much! :alright:

 

If I may suggest something though. Maybe making a few more differences in the cliffs? It would help add to the maps and make it look even better (though I do like your mapping! Honest! :3). And maybe more grass in the last screenshot with some flowers? And maybe you could add some lilie pads to the water? And if you would like some different fallen trees, flowers, mushrooms and other things, I could provide it for you :)

 

Overall, I think you did really good. Is this your first time mapping? If so, you are even better than I thought xD

 

Thx for he feedback =) and i was kinda limited using the tileset so there wasent that much of decorative tiles to be used , I could however have used events :P . And ill be happy to get some new things =). And it is my first time mapping , mapping is something i really want o improve since it has a big part when making a game. And having a great story and all dosent really matter if presented with some lame mapping or thats what I think :P And thx again for your comment =)

 

 

Here are my points.

 

In black: the dirt path has a square of grass around it. This is a different colour to the grass along one tile and so has an obvious split between the tiles.

In red: The seam is badly made. It looks as though the cliff just stops. Put the transparent section cliff bottom on to fix this.

In yellow: You are missing the inner corner tiles. Doesn't look nice.

In blue: Not so much a problem, but when you used the piece two wide, they are both middle pieces when they should have been outer pieces.

All of these are purely aesthetic, and barely detract from the beauty. Looks nice though.

 

Yea somethings i just forgot ( and didnt even see :o ) but ill work on that in the future! thx for your feedback =)

[FranklinX 37]

Your map is very good. All of the small errors have been pointed out.

[Kevin.ds 28]

Your map is very good. All of the small errors have been pointed out.

 

Thx =)

[Kevin.ds 28]

bump

[kellessdee 48]

Wow, very nice :D I like it a lot.

 

 

the only issues are (from left to right)

 

the first two are that the cliff face looks incomplete..was this on purpose?

 

the second one you should get rid of that little lip of grass. Maybe have a water fall going into the void! Are you going to have a cool panorama :D

 

EDIT: Maybe add some more scenery things to the cliff itself? or was it meant to be really barren?

[Kevin.ds 28]

its far from completed lol :D its already looking a little better