Bob423 52 Report post Posted April 23, 2011 (edited) i made some maps, and i'd like someone to critique them. I wanna make sure im doing good, and if you have any suggestions for house shapes, and know how to make them, please share. thanks :alright: to the album! Edited April 23, 2011 by Bob423 1 FranklinX reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
0 FranklinX 37 Report post Posted April 23, 2011 Please take some pictures and post them. It would be better than people downloading and potentially stealing your work. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
0 Bob423 52 Report post Posted April 23, 2011 ok, now it's an album Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
0 kellessdee 48 Report post Posted April 23, 2011 Overall they look pretty nice! I'm not the greatest mapper, so I am not sure how much actual critique, but here goes: On the first map, I may suggest making the canopy a little less square. I know it's hard on a smaller map, and its pretty good, but the canopy feels to boxy imo. Your forest maps are pretty good, but I would suggest perhaps using a variety of types of trees. Also, with the outer maps (not towns) it seems like there could be a little more nature (like flowers and random scenery)..although it's hard to tell because most of them are zoomed out. I really like the town maps and inner maps! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
0 Bob423 52 Report post Posted April 23, 2011 On the first map, I may suggest making the canopy a little less square. I know it's hard on a smaller map, and its pretty good, but the canopy feels to boxy imo. yeah, now that you mention it, it IS a little boxy Your forest maps are pretty good, but I would suggest perhaps using a variety of types of trees. Also, with the outer maps (not towns) it seems like there could be a little more nature (like flowers and random scenery)..although it's hard to tell because most of them are zoomed out. Yeah, I can't fit the whole map on the screen, so i have to zoom out. There's really only one type of tree, and i guess i could add more plants. I have animals, but it's hard to see events in the type of view i used I really like the town maps and inner maps! thanks :biggrin_002: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
0 FranklinX 37 Report post Posted April 23, 2011 Your mapping has greatly improved. You're really turning your fan series around. Keep this up and people will change their opinions about your fan series. Remember maps play a HUGE role in making a successful game. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
0 Bob423 52 Report post Posted April 23, 2011 Thanks, A couple tutorials and some examples can make a big difference i guess. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
i made some maps, and i'd like someone to critique them. I wanna make sure im doing good, and if you have any suggestions for house shapes, and know how to make them, please share. thanks :alright:
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