Runefreak 1 Report post Posted April 24, 2011 Here's a rough draft of the story. The Region of Flair have been tormented by creatures called Minions for centuries, they are under control of Zrem. He was a Follower in the Dark Realm and has been banished from it forever for still working on this part Dx.. ever since then he has planned to activate the Transfora. A device that will open a door between the Dark Realms and our universe. This was his task, to earn the respect of returning to his realm, he must activate the Transfora. The leaders of the Dark Realm left him with an army of Minions to help. While this is happening, in the city of Ohm, a man named Bryan Vandre and his son Reimm Vandre were helping the city as Bryan was a Fighter of Ohm, a clan of protectors for the city. A year after, in a battle with minions on the top of the castle, Bryan tells his son Reimm to retrieve something from the castle. Away, Reimm returns to find his father dead. Looking up he sees Zrem, who he names the "mysterious hooded man". Enraged, Reimm challenges to fight Zrem in order to show him to not mess with him or his family. Losing, Reimm falls down and passes out, and Zrem escapes. He wakes up in jail and his brother helps him escape, and explains how he got there. Back in the city of Ohm a few weeks after the death of Bryan, their father. His brother leaves Reimm alone as Reimm says he can take care of himself, he leaves on a missions with other people to help Ohm. While gone, Reimm looks back at the tragic event that happened just a few weeks ago, and vows that he will have his vengeance and kill the "mysterious hooded man" and save Flair, which is what he says to continue off of his father. After this, you are allowed to free-roam around the city of Ohm, but to continue the story you must talk to the boy at the entrance into the forest. He explains how his older sister was taken by these strange creatures and a human. So he says he'll help and ventures through the forest to help her, after helping and going through a pretty long but not boring dialogue he asked her if she would like to help and tag along to kill the myste--.. *ahem*.. Zrem. After another short but sorta boring dialogue she joins and they then recruit a Fighter of Ohm. Now with a little team and more training, you are now to free-roam through the Region and continue the story of Reimm and his quest to take vengeance of his father and to save Flair. That's the story so far. You also have a scene of the talk with the human man and Zrem and why he is working with Zrem. I'll probably have some comments about the story but I'd like to hear them as I said, I'm not the best writer. :/ Reimm Reimm is the son of Bryan Vandre, one of the greatest warriors in the city of Ohm. He was a fighter, who protected the city and Bryan's one and only task was to help bring peace back to Ohm from the creatures. After his death, Reimm vowed to take on that task and take vengeance on the creature who killed his father. Aimey She is a mage and daughter of one of the three Fighters of Ohm, her body sacrifice is wanted to active the Transfora for Zrem. Evin He is another early Fighter of Ohm, he later helps Aimey and Reimm restore peace to the Region of Flair and Ohm. More information on the characters will be updated later Enu Mr. Bubble Kylock Mr. Anonymous Shalaren Metropolis Woratana Crazyninjaguy Game_Guy Rafidelis BigEd781 KGC / Tomy Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
