Crescent Moon [Update, finally]

[Bob423 52]

you should use a pixel movement script to make the ABS look better

[Ecowolfsteen 14]

Possibly.. I never thought of that though. The ABS already comes with a diagonal movement functionality but Pixel Movement might be better.

 

The Pixel Movement script really messes with things. I can't use that in the project.

Edited June 20, 2011 by Ecowolfsteen

[Kailia 0]

Well the story sounds interesting. When you introduce the story though, should be more vague on his destiny. Say something like "He gets a special amulet, and is destined to do something great in the world with it." You revealed too much of the story I felt in the introduction.

 

Also, you mentioned that you will never reveal in game, how he was tormented and such. That I think would be a mistake. It might be an idea to give glimpses into his past through cut-scenes to show certain aspects of his tormentation. Overall, not a bad story.

Edited June 24, 2011 by Kiriashi

[Ecowolfsteen 14]

Well the story sounds interesting. When you introduce the story though, should be more vague on his destiny. Say something like "He gets a special amulet, and is destined to do something great in the world with it." You revealed too much of the story I felt in the introduction.

 

Also, you mentioned that you will never reveal in game, how he was tormented and such. That I think would be a mistake. It might be an idea to give glimpses into his past through cut-scenes to show certain aspects of his tormentation. Overall, not a bad story.

 

Actually, I have reworked A LOT of the story. It is still very dark but a lot of character bio's have been done over. Skelly is a girl, I just typed stupid. I will be updating this project with the new story, characters, and a bunch of other things, including a new feature: The Karma System.

 

Here is a screenshot of a Boss Fight:

[Ecowolfsteen 14]

Hey everyone!! :bye:

Take a look at the first original post with a new story, new title, new features, and new characters!

The game has been re-worked a lot and I've basically merged two games together now, kind of like killing two birds with one stone. So, take a look and enjoy!

Thanks! Eco ^.^

[BlackSpirit 0]

Wow ! that looks really nice!

:clap:

 

 

:jay:

Edited July 6, 2011 by BlackSpirit

[Ecowolfsteen 14]

Wow ! that looks really nice!

:clap:

 

 

:jay:

 

Thank you, BlackSpirit! I'm glad you took the time to look at this very "messy" topic and drop a comment!

[FranklinX 37]

Your game looks good. I love the screen shots. Is this battle system like the one in Secrets of Mana?

 

I don't understand your story. It's not clear in the first post. I don't understand what is going on and why.

[Ecowolfsteen 14]

Yes it is like the one in Secrets of Mana. It can be found here for more info on it.

As for my story.. I think it's quite simple. You get captured to use your abilities to get magic gems for some ex-Imperial soldiers, something goes wrong when you touch the gems and the soldiers steal them and leave you. But the Underworld Elemental Clan claims that the gems are their's so they can rule the world. You have to defeat the UEC to bring peace back to the world.. What are you not getting?

 

And thank you for the comment on my screen shots. :)

[Ecowolfsteen 14]

Sorry for the almost a year necro-post, but this project is being revived due to my growing Indie Company, Soft Blue Studios. Now we have two main projects to tackle. A busy summer ahead. :) Will update first post with new stuff tomorrow. Thanks everyone for all the support :)

[Ecowolfsteen 14]

Alright! Updated! Really later than promised. Sorry about this. The story is final now, I promise.

[Bob423 52]

you forgot a name in the credits eco :P

[Ecowolfsteen 14]

you forgot a name in the credits eco

Crap, sorry about that.