Wyzrd 12 Report post Posted June 5, 2007 This a new song by me just peep it and leave me feedback. http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.c...;songID=5419433 Parental Advisory - Explicit Lyrics (They not to bad though) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RMXPirate 0 Report post Posted June 5, 2007 pretty good! It could have a better beat and some more rhymes but its good. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wyzrd 12 Report post Posted June 5, 2007 Thanks, personally I love that beat. And the rhymes I know their not top notch like I've been known to do sometimes. I was just tryin' to say some shit and wasn't tryin' to go all out and impress everyone. It was more a track for me to know I still got it 'cuz I haven't done nething in a while. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RMXPirate 0 Report post Posted June 5, 2007 Makes since. Well keep up the good work, hope to here more of your work soon! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wyzrd 12 Report post Posted June 6, 2007 Yea there quite a bit of stuff in that song though I wouldn't expect people that aren't rappers to pick up on. Like there some multies and stuff. If you would like me to elaborate I will. And as far as new work I gotta couple things I'm still workin' on. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Arkbennett 16 Report post Posted June 6, 2007 Wyz is gangsta, gangsta. =) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wyzrd 12 Report post Posted June 6, 2007 Lol ight ight Ark. This song is higher on the charts then any of my other songs have been so hopefully ya'll can listen to it and vote it hot. Get me some where lol. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
