Soul Unsheathed

[Demondaze 0]

You cannot walk on water

You cannot run the sky

You cannot kill a god

And legends never die

 

You cannot break a broken sword

You cannot bend cold steel

You cannot feel the killing stroke

You cannot see the real

 

You cannot make them live again

You cannot make you die

You cannot fix what you have done

You cannot learn to cry

 

You cannot turn away and run

You cannot feel the fear

You cannot live, You cannot Die

For all you know is near

 

You cannot love, you cannot hate

For you there is no now

You cannot be the man you've made

Until you've bled the ground,

 

You cannot live, you cannot die

There is no here and now

In your eyes reflect the storms

Growing in the clouds.

 

::Unlike Other World, this one is pure character. My character in the Grand Drama of Life, actually. Love me; I need it::

 

::Okay, so I'm full of crap::

[Satiel 0]

Dude, this sounds like an excellent set of lyrics to add to a power or speed metal song.

That's how I read it - really fast. Really really fast!

 

I really like these kinda poems. They're straight to the point and make good use of that repetitive rhetoric.