I'm developing a new origin story for my game.

[Jesse66126 4]

 

Instead of vaguely hinting at it, like I did in previous games. The story goes like this:

 

A little girl and her family were in a car wreck. The girl is horribly mangled by the crash, and the girl's sister was impaled through the heart. Rather than live, the girl offers up her heart to save her sister's life. As the girl's life support is shut off, a purple haired woman appears at her bedside.

 

"You have...such a beautiful soul," she says, "I wonder… What kind of world would you create? Would you have made same mistakes as my children have? Would you be able to effectively rule over your creations with such gentle heart? ...I want to see it..."

 

With those words, the girl wakes up in the middle of space, unknowingly endowed with the full power of God.

After drifting around for a while, she finds a pile of bones, which appear to belong to a large cat.

Without really meaning to, she resurrects the beast in the form of Big Blue, the lion-fox from her saturday morning cartoon show.

The player takes control of the lion to assist her in creating and maintaining her galaxy, and defending her from enemies.

[Saltome 16]

Well the story sounds a bit... Uh, girlish, but it's kind of original. And I'm curious, how exactly will the game actually play?

As far as the dress color, red and blue go better with the purple hair, but blue contrasts better with her dark skin tone.

[Jesse66126 4]

I use Mr. Mo's ABS, and everything is "Free-2-Kill" (even the girl) but with HUGE consequences.

You play as a lion. As he grows in combat strength, he gradually becomes physically ugly. Scales, Horns,Black wings, etc. He evolves into the Devourer, the legendary monster that the gods united their power to finally kill.

It's not a single-story driven game.

[rgangsta 43]

Nice drawings and story. Now that you mention a Devourer, it doesn't sound girly.

Free-2-Kill, eh?

[Moonpearl 32]

Interesting plot, but as Saltome said, I'm very curious as to what game mechanics you're going to use because this sounds exactly like the kind of storyline which sounds great at first but comes with disappointing gameplay.

 

As for the dress, I'm very partial to blue anyways, but maybe you should try with less flashy colors, because none of the three seems suitable to me.

[Jesse66126 4]

The gameplay will be like the Mr. Mo version of Elder Scrolls, Everyone has a health bar, guards attack you,etc. However, in order to level effectively down the spiral of destruction, you have to eat their corpses, and well, everything else really.

See the beast was created by a VERY hateful deity, as weapon against his siblings, however, the beast's design was too perfect for the job, and he became like Galactus, gulping planets like a boss.

 

As the good path, you want to AVOID killing at all cost. You develope scare tacticals, like Roar, and protection skills, like Barrier, which forms an invincible shield around your target but drains SP over time. Also, you're concerned with appearances, and repeatative fighting builds up his hatred and draws out his ugly form.