LovePhoenix

Easy peasy: Nerine from Shuffle! Eagle Vision from Magic Knights Rayearth. (Who won't love such a cutie?) And a cute yellow fairy from Bottle Fairy, but I can't remember her name. ><

Hmm not sure if this is necroposting but it doesn't count for stickies, does it? Anyway, this is my game's title screen. I am planning on modifying it soon, though, and fix some stuff.

I just played through your demo. I haven't actually finished it, but I played enough to comment. Overall, I like your story and how original it is. Not sure about the Michelle "falling in love" with the princess, but it actually adds an interesting twist. There are some cliches, of course, but since they are minors, it doesn't much matter. Now to comment on the demo. The mapping was very poor in details, especially in towns and caves. Remember that there are always stuff to add in the tilesets so don't let it be limited to just the walls and grounds. The interiors were not so bad (although they lacked detail as well) and could be improved, but that castle interior was really poorly made. It lacks lots of details and is very tight and not allowing much view or space. And also that ruins map wasn't detailed at all and was very symmetrical. (Remember that symmetries are really bad in maps.) I recommend that you read some mapping tutorials just to spice up your mapping. Overall, it isn't so bad and you already have a good idea of it, but you should improve your detailing. Now on the gameplay. Just to be honest, I think everything was really rushed. I suddenly found myself playing up with nothing in mind but to find the princess. Also, I wasn't sure whether to tell the Supreme thief was a guy or a girl, since the sprite is female while the others addressed him/her with "him". Also, I think I found that princess way too soon. Perhaps adding some events to happen before I find her, or just add a little more gameplay. Same for the dialogues. I felt that they sounded a little awkward at some parts, like the part where Mike says "And so he can't kill me...sounds good to me." It felt a little awkward how a little thief, who was just really scared by that supreme thief would betray him/her in a second. Also, I don't see a reason why would the thief go to the princess and simply tell her "I am one of the thieves." Isn't she afraid of her, knowing that she killed many before her? I honestly expected something like killing her in her sleep or trying to assassinate her or something. Just try to add up more to heat it up and make it more exciting. Overall, the game has potential, and if you improve those points I mentioned, I have a feeling it may turn out to be a great game. ^^

Hi all, I thought it's time to post my introduction here. Like you already see, my username is Lovephoenix, although I am called Love and dreamykitty on other places. I am 13 years old, from Egypt. My first rmxp game to play was Aveyond, and from here now on I began to learn how to make games using RPG Maker XP. I have started a project called The Gifted Child already, and might post it sometime here soon. About me, I like anime, singing, dancing, cats (as you already see from this cute kitten in my avvie lol), and making games. I have also created my own small community, called Snow Flower Games (www.snowflowergames.withme.us), which I hope will grow up one day to be as good as this one. ^^ For my rmxp skills, I am pretty good at mapping (well, not that good but I am decent) and know a little of spriting. I hope I can learn some stuff here and improve. ^^ Well, that's all I can say. I hope to make some friends from around here. ^^

Can you please be more specific on what you want? What kind of autotiles? Do you just want a pack or something?

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