I don't usually ask for help on development of games, but when I do, prefer asking it on RMXP Unlimited
Calling All Seasoned Pros and Ambitious Noobs Alike
I would like a suggestion forum for a game I'm planing on making called
P.Aradox
The Main Story Frame work is near completion, so I would rather have suggestions on the game play, graphic side, and small story details
This game follows the events of an early game I designed called Mindscape
A boy wakes up in a strange abandoned Mansion having absolutely no memory. There is a large number of door ways and windows, but most of them are locked.
The boy is unable to go outside because the only door to the outside opens up to the pitch black void of space. The house is the only thing that exists. Wondering into a room he
finds the spirit of a young child fleeing strange looking monsters. When the boy dives in and saves the little girl, she grants him the power, in the form of strange shape shifting weapons (NOT POWERs; WEAPONS THAT CHANGE FORM) to defeat the monsters, Called Impediments. The girl introduces herself as Maera. She also claims that one day she woke up in the house with no memory. However, she does know that each door in the house has a key, opening the door to new worlds in the house and as a ghost, she cannot change the house. Maera uses her power through the boy so that they can solve the mystery of the house. Furthermore, while wondering through the house, the boy randomly gets part of his memory back. Traveling through the house he finds a girl named Aira who he seems to remember. Aira on the other hand remembers him completely, even calling him by his real name. But when Aira sees Maera, she immediately becomes hostile attempting to kill her. Aira is so strong that The boy and Maera have to retreat.
Through out the house, the Boy and Maera meet other strange entities that seems more or less related to Maera.
The Truth about Maera is the Truth about the House, about the past and the future.
Main Characters
(Koda)
Has amnesia and randomly gains his memories back, he is the only entity in the house that Maera can directly link to and utilize Maera's power
Maera
A strange little girl spirit that contains strange reality bending psychic abilities. She has no material body and anchors herself to Koda for safety.
Aira
An entity that seems to have known Koda in a past life. She utterly hates Maera and wishes to destroy her completely.
Subconscious
An entity that can hijack and distort Maera's abilities. This entity seems neither malevolent nor benevolent, but is heartless and is insistent on destroying the house. She looks like an older form of Maera with long hair.
(Imperceptus) Unknown
An entity that not only ignores Maera's abilities, but can utilize them to some extent, and the laws of physics of the house. It also distorts the dimensions. There is no rational thought process for her actions.
Fervio
Similar to Imperceptus, she ignores Maera's abilities and has no rational though process. However she cannot defies the laws nor utilize Maera's powers. This entity contains pure destructive power, akin to Aira and can overwhelm Maera's abilities and the natural limits of the house
Origin
The Last Entity. Not only does she have Maera's abilities, she can override them. Her thoughts are unknown, although her goal seems to be the destruction of the house.
End
The First Entity. The first entity that came into existence, this entity is similar to unknown, popping in and out of the existence of the house seemingly randomly. This entity seems different from all the others as it shows no hostility to either Maera or the House. While Origin barely speaks, End is completely Mute.