Moved to general game discussion.
Of course it is discouraging. I have some suggestions:
Make your topic content better; Don't make a topic, make a game page, and Make blog posts in the games system that are not too long, not too short, and focused on one or two topics only If you want feedback on something, ask for it.
I looked at your topic. In regards to point 1 above, it isn't too surprising there were no replies. Your screenies are pretty stock standard. There's really nothing to say about them except... keep going. All of them show very little and there's no relation at all to the storyline.
Speaking of which:
This is very vague and contains too little information. Why is it attacking itself? Why does no one trust each other? When writing, focus on your audience. You should write it from the perspective of someone reading it for the first time... that way you can decide when to go into depth on a particular point. So for an intro that's only a few sentences long, you will make it more broad and not contain ambiguous details. The goal is to make the reader curious, not confused and trying to figure out how it works. You could also elaborate on a more complete storyline and place it in a spoiler, but I don't think that's necessary. Only where you think it can add value to what you're trying to achieve.